by kimp » Wed Feb 03, 2016 10:06 pm
:: Liberty lifts a finger in the universal 'one dragon's sign, goes over to the table she abandoned, grabs her notebook, and returns. Dropping back down on the hearth she flips through the pages, then looks up with a frown ::
Try and shift what? Is that something Mr North Saud last time?
:: Giving him a moment to think, collect his thoughts or himself, etc... she continued in the earlier vein ::
One of the important things we need to ask ourselves is are there three elements of the story that need action - North, Mo, the Killer - or are there four - those three and Us. It seems like we've been written into the story several times. That was reported by...
:: she flips a few pages of her notebook ::
Kelsey, I think, from an earlier encounter and by several of you from this last time. You all seemed to be actively affected by the magic of the story, suggesting you were now part of it. If we are part of the story then we need to be part of the resolution of it or we could remain affected by the magic even if we are able to release No, North, and the Killer.
:: Another few flips of pages. A slight frown ::
Red has much better notes on this.
:: she reads a page then looks up ::
I noted that some people want the resolution to be that North saves Mo. Others would like Mo to save herself. Others thought it would make a good story of we brought the dead lover back in - he wasn't really dead so Mo didn't need to cling to the belief that she deserves to do penance or they could end up HEA. We are still all over the page on this. It comes from different people having different stories that work best for them. What we need to do is come up with a story that works for everyone involved including Mo and North, I think. Otherwise we might end up with unresolved issues continuing the narrative.
:: she clocks her head slightly ::
Does that make sense?
Liberty Blue
aka kim